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Thursday, November 14, 2019
Thursday, August 15, 2019
Cross Country!! (Race)
OMG!! The time had come, my nerves had kicked and I could feel my butterflies flapping there tiny little wings in my stomach. Mrs Gomm had called the year 6 girls up, we walked along the pathway to the starting line. AS we lined up I looked down the path, I could see my Mum and Dad waiting for me. “Mr Barclay blew the loud whistle and off we went. Sprinting down the I could feel the long green grass tickling my tootsies. “Sharelle had sprinted of and caught a huge lead but that didn’t last for long, the determination and th drive in my mind gave me that little edge to push that much harder. I flew past my parents and circled the powerpost. My second lap was done. Up ahead I caught eye of my friends walking. Catching upto her I gave her a pat on the back and jogged along beside . A few metres up ahead Mr Barclay and Peni was standing by the finish line a gave my last bit pf energy in and sprinted to the finish. I was over the moon that I got first place. A few seconds after that my friends ran into my arms and congratulated me and nothing felt better.
OMG!! The time had come, my nerves had kicked and
I could feel my butterflies flapping there tiny little wings
in my stomach. Mrs Gomm had called the year 6 girls up,
we walked along the pathway to the starting line. AS we
lined up I looked down the path, I could see my Mum and
Dad waiting for me. “Mr Barclay blew the loud whistle and
off we went. Sprinting down the I could feel the long green
grass tickling my tootsies. “Sharelle had sprinted of and
caught a huge lead but that didn’t last for long, the
determination and th drive in my mind gave me that little
edge to push that much harder. I flew past my parents
and circled the powerpost. My second lap was done. Up ahead
I caught eye of my friends walking. Catching upto her I gave
her a pat on the back and jogged along beside . A few metres
up ahead Mr Barclay and Peni was standing by the finish line a
gave my last bit pf energy in and sprinted to the finish. I was
over the moon that I got first place. A few seconds after that my
friends ran into my arms and congratulated me and nothing felt
better.
Tuesday, August 13, 2019
Winter Poetry!!
Today in Cybersmart we were learning how to include descriptive languages. I have tried to include these images down the bottom to add some detail or something a bit extra to my work. I have also learnt how to embed my work into my blogger without it going of the page.
Enjoy!!
Enjoy!!
Wednesday, August 7, 2019
Tuia 250 [Learning]
This is my Picture
I choose this pitacular background, because I love like going to the beach early to watch the sunset, going for swims early or late at night.
Some places I would like to go is Hawaii, Kaitawa, Gold Coast, Gisborne, Anora and Tolaga Bay.
Our inquiry in room 2 this Term is Tuia 250. This bird is called The explore and we used this picture for our inquiry
I choose this pitacular background, because I love like going to the beach early to watch the sunset, going for swims early or late at night.
Some places I would like to go is Hawaii, Kaitawa, Gold Coast, Gisborne, Anora and Tolaga Bay.
Our inquiry in room 2 this Term is Tuia 250. This bird is called The explore and we used this picture for our inquiry
Thursday, July 25, 2019
Recount about my Holiday
A Long Trip To Rotorua
Success Criteria
:Use descriptive language
:Punctuation in the right places
One early warm Sunday morning, my family and
I set off on a trip to Rotorua. I wound down
the window and saw a magnificent view of the
sunrise, it was filled with multiple colours such
peach orange, golden yellow and a light beige
colour filling the centre of the sunrise. The fresh
cold breeze blew my luscious golden hair round and
round in circles. “Constantly I asked, were we
nearly there yet and the answer was always we are
not far away, but in my head I near we were ages away
from reaching the destination. One hour later I took a peek
through the clear glass window and saw the
motel we were going to be staying at for a few days.
I grabbed the key that opened our door, and turned it
round until the door unlocked. I slowly walked inside
curious of what I was going to see. It was like we were
living in a castle it was stunning. I placed my bag and
my gear on the top of my soft and cozy bed. I jumped
on my bed and turned on the TV and rested up for later.
Soon after that it was time to do the SHOPPING!!
I was over the moon that my Mum was going to take
me out to go and do some shopping. I hopped in the
car and we headed for K’mart one of my favourite stores.
We walked inside the clear glass doors and I grabbed an
extra large trolley just in case. I walked round the whole
entire shop making sure I didn’t miss one little thing.
Picking out some items that I wanted I politely asked my
Mum if I could have them, “buy politely I met begged my
Mum if I could have them”. Our shopping trip came to an
end so we decided to grab something to eat which was Mc’Donalds.
Best day ever I gratefully shouted with joy!!
Tuesday, July 23, 2019
Me and my special creation!!
This is my me and my jandal art.
This creation tells a story or mentions something about you. In my jandal art I painted the beach, I drew the beach because it is my favourite place to go on a hot summers day. On my other jandal I painted stripes that a filled with multiple colours, I painted colourful stripes because I love colours it always reminds me of the rainbow which is something that I love also.
What was the process of creating and designing your jandal art??
First we started of with a blank piece of paper, we drew something that either told a story or something about you. Then we drew it on our jandals. After that we filled the white spaces with colours that we wanted to use, we did about two or three coats of paint. Then Mrs Gomm hot glued the straps onto the jandals. We are so proud of jandals that we displayed them in the school hall.
This creation tells a story or mentions something about you. In my jandal art I painted the beach, I drew the beach because it is my favourite place to go on a hot summers day. On my other jandal I painted stripes that a filled with multiple colours, I painted colourful stripes because I love colours it always reminds me of the rainbow which is something that I love also.
What was the process of creating and designing your jandal art??
First we started of with a blank piece of paper, we drew something that either told a story or something about you. Then we drew it on our jandals. After that we filled the white spaces with colours that we wanted to use, we did about two or three coats of paint. Then Mrs Gomm hot glued the straps onto the jandals. We are so proud of jandals that we displayed them in the school hall.
Tuesday, June 18, 2019
All about me!!
This term we have been focused on putting descriptive language in our writing. I have worked consistently to try and make my writing better. Using descriptive language paints a picture in the reader's mind.
I believe I’m good at sport..,....
Netball is my most passionate sport and my most common sport, meaning netball is my favourite
sport, and which sport I play the most.
Everyday I face new challenges, just dealing with my mate Jemima, she is a handful,”but believe I myself am way more than a handful”. “Mrs Gomm agrees”
My goals for 2019, are to make it into the Student Council, make it into all the competitive sports teams, achieve the shield, and be as kind as my lovely teacher Mrs Gomm.
I'm really looking forward to making it into the silver ferns when im older. My inspiration is honestly my older brother, he is so unbelievably and inspiring because he never gives up and that is one of my main goals and something I really want to achieve. I
Friday, June 7, 2019
Tuesday, May 7, 2019
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