Recount about my Holiday

A Long Trip To Rotorua

Success Criteria

:Use descriptive language

:Punctuation in the right places

One early warm Sunday morning, my family and

I set off on a trip to Rotorua. I wound down

the window and saw a magnificent view of the

sunrise, it was filled with multiple colours such

peach orange, golden yellow and a light beige

colour filling the centre of the sunrise. The fresh

cold breeze blew my luscious golden hair round and

round in circles. “Constantly I asked, were we

nearly there yet and the answer was always we are

not far away, but in my head I near we were ages away

from reaching the destination. One hour later I took a peek

through the clear glass window and saw the

motel we were going to be staying at for a few days. 

I grabbed the key that opened our door, and turned it

round until the door unlocked. I slowly walked inside

curious of what I was going to see. It was like we were

living in a castle it was stunning. I placed my bag and

my gear on the top of my soft and cozy bed. I jumped

on my bed and turned on the TV and rested up for later.

Soon after that it was time to do the SHOPPING!!

I was over the moon that my Mum was going to take

me out to go and do some shopping. I hopped in the

car and we headed for K’mart one of my favourite stores.

We walked inside the clear glass doors and I grabbed an

extra large trolley just in case. I walked round the whole

entire shop making sure I didn’t miss one little thing.

Picking out some items that I wanted I politely asked my

Mum if I could have them, “buy politely I met begged my

Mum if I could have them”. Our shopping trip came to an

end so we decided to grab something to eat which was Mc’Donalds.

Best day ever I gratefully shouted with joy!!