Tuesday, May 7, 2019

Waikanae Sea's

3 comments:

  1. I enjoyed making my backgroud, I found challenging writing what you can smell at the beach,

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  2. I really like the way you used described the sun as crispy
    I learnt that you can hear seagulls at the beach
    `Next time you should use some punctuation

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  3. helpful learning kind

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