Monday, August 5, 2019

Enviromental Poetry!!

This is my Enviromental Poem. So today Room 2 had a picture given to us by Mrs Gomm. We used that picture and described it. First we broke it down into Nouns, Verbs, Adjectives and Adverbs and then we put them into sentences. The challenging part of this was probably finding good descriptive adjectives. 

The cold crystal clear water shimmers brightly
  a star in the night sky...
Icy cold mountains peacefull
enjoying the beaming hot sun...
Chocolate brown rocks sunbathe happily
on the lake shore...
Fluffy white clouds stretch through the sky.

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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousAugust 7, 2019 at 9:35 AM

    今日は, Samara.
    My name is Emerald, and I am a fellow classmate of yours in Room 2.
    I was intrigued by your expressive use of descriptive language, considering it is up to par with your level in writing.
    I learnt that you had a full example on what the success criteria for writing these poems were.
    Maybe you could try adding slightly more punctuation, as some sentences need to have a comma during your speech for more breathing room.
    決別.

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